Introduction of Script Writing- Previous Twist ( Murder by Lembeck)

Previous Twist ( Murder by Lembeck)

INT.ITALIAN.DAY

Douglas Coker took a sip of red wine and watched his new client over the remains of his eggplant parmigiana.

coker

(voice low)

It'll be an accident. A completely unavoidable, relatively painless accident. I guarantee you won't be suspected.

Adam pearce

Eyed the tomato-y mess on Coker's plate and held up his hand.

No detail, man. I don't wanna know.

Coker

(Smiled slightly)

Of course no. I wouldn't dream of boring you. But it will be done by the end of next week.

Pearce nodded and lock of long hair fell in his eye. Coker brushed it back tanned fingers and leaned forward.

COKER

(Jaw tightened and gritted perfect teeth)

You gotta understand. The marriage just didn't work out. But since Lina inherited her dad's company, she control all the money...She treats me like a little kid. A hundred dollars here, a hundred there. I'm on an allowance, for crying out loud!

Coker's turn to hold up his hand.

COKER

I don't care why, Mr.Pearce. Just rest assured that you've spent your money well.

Pearce

I'll have the money to you by tomorrow. In the meantime...

Pearce were icy as he withdrew a picture from his wallet and slid it a across the table to Coker. Coker pocketed the picture with out looking at it and then handed the restaurant bill to Pearce.

INT.Coffee shop.Day

Coker strode onto the sidewalk to meet his next client Terri Murr.

Terri Murr

(Stared at the napkin, then began to tear it into shreds)

You ask for a lot of money, Mr Coker.

Coker

I perform a valuable service, Mrs. Murr. Believe me, i'm worth every penny.

Terri Murr pursed her full red lips as she contemplated the shredded napkin.

TERRI MURR

(Voice lower to a whisper)

When i married George a year ago, i really didn't expect... I really didn't expect him to last this long. But he's been on a health-kick and his doctor says he might live for years.

(Thrri clenched her small fists)

I'll--i'll be old by then! I want to get on with my life now. We have a pre-nuptial agreement that says i'll get nothing if we discover, but it doesn't cover-- well, you know.

Coker nodded sympathetically but remained silent. Terri's fingers jumped from the shredded napkin to her cup, then back again.

TERRI MURR

All right. I suppose we have a deal.

EXT.outside.day/night

Coker spent next few days observing Lina Pearce and knowing her individual's habits and decide which method to use. Lina are favored drab business suit and sensible shoes. When she wasn't rushing into her office, she was on her cellular phone in her elegant back sedan.

Twice during the week Coker watched Lina met a man-- a man a good deal older than Adam Pearce-- in an intimate hostel restaurant. Both times, when she emerged several hours later, she drove through the countryside at top speed, no doubt trying to soothe her guilt.

EXT.OUTSIDE.DAY/NIGHT

Coker focused on George Murr when he wasn't watching Lina.

Coker parked down the block from the Murr's home and settle back to watch for the old man.

TERRI MURR

Murr's schedule was set in stone-every afternoon at 4:00, he went for a jog as part of his new health program.

INT.Apartment.day/night

Coker paced his living room and thought about Adam and Terri Murr. He realized that both are selfish. People used to wait until their mid life crisis to decide on the dire severces he provided, but these two--!

Coker an idea began to take shape.

EXT.OUTSIDE/DAY/NIGHT

Aweek later, Coker finished a lunch of Brie and fruit, patted his lips with a napkin, and pushed away from the tabla and he implement his plan.

He checked a number inhis private address book and picked up the phone.

COKER

Coker here. We have to meet. Yes, it's important. That's fine. Tonight at 7:00.

(Coker smiled slightly)

Coker placed another call.

EXT.outside italian restaurant.night

Coker watch as the man strode up the sidewalk across the street.He stood outside the italian restaurant and glanced at his watch and the women arrive from the other direction. They each on their own side of the doorway.

Coker took a sip of coffee and smiled as he saw them glance at each other, then away. At 7:20, he saw the man strike up a conversation. Through their body language, Coker could almost hear what they said.

man

(Shrugging)

I guess we've both been stood up

Woman

(Nodded)

Yes.

He gesture to the restaurant.

man

Well, we're here, so we might as well eat. Would you like to join me?

Woman hesitated a moment, then shook his hand

Woman

I suppose dinner would be all right.

The two entered the restaurant and Coker lost sight of them. Coker analyze that they would underserved happiness, before their individual selfish natures took over. He wondered a little future business.

Introduction of Script Writing- Weekend Story [[The Price of Disentangle]]

Weekend Story [[The Price of Disentangle]]

One guy Mason sitting top of the building. He tearing and handing her girl friends picture. He cant acceptable his girlfriend break up with him. He feeling without anything in his life. He drunk and see the portrait again. His phone is ringing, caller is his mother, he seeing the phone with hesitate and he giving up to receive the phone call which calling by his brother Joey. He breaking the bottle of bear and handing one of the piece of glass, he mind to cutting his trick to end their life. But he cant to it, he cry and angry himself because he didn't have courage to end his life. He throwing a piece of glass and cry again. Suddenly his phone ringing again, at this moment he throwing and breaking his phone until its didn't ringing again. He standing and seeing the environment around him. He having an idea to end his life which is jumping from building. Like common people who commit suicide of jumper, he rowing as neat for all his things on the floor its mean to putting down all of the secular. Standing up at corner of the building and closing his eyes. He feeling he is most of the one living so hard in his life. smile, this is the first portrait what he standing beside of the building. He smile himself because one of the girl can make him feeling painful until he want to end his life to getting disentangle. Studding awhile, he stepping in one feed to jumping from the building.

  He falling down, at the first, he seeing 18 floor's aunt Soh bully from her husband. Then is 17 floor's uncle Josh quietly smelling his daughter's underwear. 16 floor's teenager John effecting of epileptic. 14 floor mentally ill's uncle Bean is tooling anyway. 10 floor's child, lie on the bed because of Vegetative of disease. 9 floor's family of uncle are suffer from hunger because he lose his job 3 weeks ago. He realize he is not the most painful people of this world. Then he seeing the environment around him, he seeing the beauty warming sunset dancing with the cloud, flourishing of the street and he seeing his home. Its opposite of the building between his jumping from the building. At this angle he can seeing the whole area around of his floor. He seeing his mother feeling happy to cooking a lot of delicious food, his brother Joey is using a phone to calling someone, his younger brother decoration the balloon, ribbon and etc with younger sister Joan, his father preparing the birthday cake and his ether sister is using the video cam to recoding this happy and warming memories. He suddenly analysis to day is his birthday and the parents are preparing a warming surprise to him. But their parents may not know, he will giving another big surprise to his parents. He smile, at this time, he smile himself for doing this kind of stupid thing. But its to late, he is lie on his pool of blood. All of the people what he saw at each floor are seeing him by now. His action make alarming to everybody on the street. Someone is calling ambulance, someone are covering their children's eyes and leaving from this area.

  He standing up and leaving out from his body. He was a human, but he is a soul now. He sitting beside his dead's body, he feeling confuse because he mind to end his life to disentangle anything, but his memory still in his brain. He analyze that the yoke still around him and he also analyze suicide is not the way to solving the problem. Maybe the prices of disentangle is losing disentangle. He cry because he cant see the future now. He starting to smile, he smile himself and feeling regret, but its too late to turn back his way. He accompany his body until the black box car arrive and sending his body to hospital.

  The sunset does down and changing at night. Their parents start to nerves because he cant calling him. His mom quickly to burn a stick of incense to blessing the god for his child's safety come back. But accidentally, a stick of incense cant be burn by fire and the portrait of the god suddenly crack. She mother analyze something and quickly worship on bended knees to blessing the god. His dad worrying and continuously walking around the home. Suddenly the house phone is ringing, its calling from hospital. His mother drop down the phone and crash after he hearing the phone. Its a big surprise for them. They all hugging together, the cries of sound is around the home. His younger sister Joan is request his brother alive from dad. Someone are crying at the corner of the house, its Mason, he came back and watching all the state of his parents, but no body can seeing him. He feeling painful and continuously to beating himself, but no matter how strength he use to beating himself, he cant feeling any painful because he is a soul, a real soul. But what can he fell is painful from emotional.
He smile, smile himself to do this kind of stupid things but its too late to changing the result. He only can see what he did and giving painful to the people who caring about him. He lose control and rushing in his bedroom and hiding under the bed. He crying and cant bearing this result. Suddenly one letter is dropping down beside him, its a letter sent from Harvard University at Cambridge. He success to request to continue study at Harvard University and the university is preparing full scholarship to him for continue study. He smile, smile himself, because of one girl he lose a lot of things. Review back, he ever had a lot of dream before. He mind be a famous director, earn a lot of money, then caring and traveling his parents around the world. But because of one girl he giving up all his dream. Its that worst? He stop crying and analyze for himself. He mind to getting a answer from his "Ex girlfriend" Mandy. He standing up and leaving from the bedroom, passing the living room, he discovering his parents are leaving out, maybe is going to take his body.

  He standing outside at the house of Mandy and melancholy between his action. He courage and crossing the door to finding Mandy. There are double raw house, he start to searching the foreground but didn't found anyone. He discovering Mandy's phone is lay up on the table, there is one message showing on the screen. Its sand from his classmate Joyce to notice Mandy that the news of him. He realize that Mandy was knowing his suicide and he start to crying because he may know Mandy is feeling sad and painful for this news. He start to reproach himself, he ever giving a promise to Mandy which giving her a happiness of life. But at this time, he didn't have courage to facing Mandy. He feel that he will feeling painful when he saw Mandy feeling painful.
At the sometime he hearing some sound from second floor, be curiously he lowly moving up at second floor. On the way, he seeing Mandy's bra and underwear lay up on the stair. He continue moving up until crossing in the bedroom of Mandy. He is surprise and cant believable what he saw. Mandy is lie on the bed and playing 3P sex with another 2 guys. He shock and stunning awhile, one of the guys is his best friend Tin and another one is his neighbor Louis. The three of them having a sex together, he totally breakdown, his heart is break, his love is break, his friendship is break. He screaming and crying for the joke of destiny, but nobody can hearing him because he is a soul, a real soul and he also cant do anything. He feeling disappointing and angry, but he cant changing anything, then he means to leaving Mandy's house. Now he know the answer, and regret what he did, but nothing can change, its too late to recover back all the things. He sitting beside the street and watching the vehicle crossing the road. He confuse for the future. He wont come back to find Mandy again because she is a girl who easy virtue, holding a love as a game and he wont go back home too, because there is no longer his home. He cant forgive himself. Maybe "the price of disentangle is losing disentangle", this is the final answer what he got but the price is deal of life.

  He hearing a sound around his ears, its speaking from a man who call oneself a hells angels and notice Mason he would be repeating to do a suicide until the end of  life on his humanity life as a punishment.

  One soul is repeating to jumping from a building everyday. At jumping movement he  saw the every floor of people and parents. But nobody can seeing him, because he is a soul who repeating to do suicide. Maybe "The price of disentangle is losing disentangle".

   I wake up from my dreams, a dream between real and fact. Who am i? I'm LaughingKho. I drunk until fall asleep last night. "My hand still holding my "Ex girlfriend" photo. Maybe the god through the dream and let me know, i'm not the most painful in the world, I have a lot of things which people didn't got it before. Maybe "the price of disentangle is losing disentangle". Im Laughingkho, i break up, but SO WHAT!

End

Introduction of Script Writing- Identifying Archetypes

Identifying Archetypes

Movie: Going Home
Direct by: Zhang Yang
Production Time: 2007
Production Area: China/ Hong Kong
Genres: Comedy
Duration: 110 minutes
Release Time: 2007-1-19

Synopsis
-Lao Zhao is one of the farmer more than 50 years old. He move to ShengZheng for temporary work. One day his friend Lao Lew die on site and Lao Zhao decided launching his journey that burying Lao Liew on Lao Liew's hometown. At the first, Zhao masquerading Lew as a drunker and take a long-distance bus. But unfortunately, they meet a gang of robbers blocking a road and plunging their wealth. Zhao preserve the compensation of Lew. Finally Zhao won the respect from robbers and rescued all the wealth of passenger. But he exposed Lew is a corpse, then he get off by passenger. After that he continue his journey, he try to stopping a car and masquerading Lew as a emergency patient. And he meet a good guy took them to hospital, but he quietly slipping away when they arrive at hospital. He night stay at simple and crude hotel and after one night he discover his money stole by someone. Zhao feeling sadly but he still persist his promise. He masquerading Lew as a bigger to solving the problem of the money; He went to other people's funeral to solving the problem of food; he request the salon girl to makeup for Lew to covering the limpidity; In one of the day he discovering Lew's compensation is false moneys; He is caught in debris flow and saving by one of a cop. Eventually he cremated Lew with a cop and the cop fetching Lew to destination. When they reach, Zhao discover the village were submerged under water and Lew's son had wrote a word on there. Its a new address. Zhao is cry again, but the cop mind to fetch him to there.

Identifying Archetypes
Lao Zhao
Lao Zhao is one of the farmer more than 50 years old. He move to ShengZheng for temporary work. One day his friend Lao Lew die on site and Lao Zhao decided launching his journey that burying Lao Liew on Lao Liew's hometown.

Lao Lew
-One of the labourer, friend's of Lao Zhao. accidentally alcohol death.

Song Dan Dan
-In order to provide and support his son advanced study at college, she do a blood selling in the city to earn money. But her son was dislike and avoid this dirty mother.

Truck Driver
-A taciturn  tough guy. He was wail, because of one song to evoked his memories of love.

Old man
-A lonely old man.

Traveler
-He riding a bicycle to Tibet to test his perseverance.

Beekeeper
-His wife accidentally disfigured. They decided move to suburb and being a beekeeper. He encourage Lao Zhao arrive the destination.

Introduction of Script Writing- Identify Story Line

Introduction of Script Writing- Identify Story Line

Basic Information

Name:                                      Sense and sensibility

Production:                              Columbia Pictures

Company of issuing:               Columbia Pictures

Area location:                          USA

Shooting:                                 April 19, 1995 - July 7, 1995

Directed by:                             An Lee

Screenwriter:                           Emma Thompson

Producer:                                 Sidney Pollack, James Shams

Type:                                       Story

Trailer:                                     136 minutes

Release time:                          December 13, 1995 (Canada)

Dialogue language:                 English

Color:                                       Color

Synopsis

-Nolan estate owner died. follow the tradition the property can not be divided according to family .His son John inherited a most of property, and three daughters and his wife only a small fee to get a little life.

-The four women out of the estate.

 -Fanny's brother Edward to manor sojourn, fell in love with three sisters Sister Eleanor, but this Fanny tried to stop them contacts.

-Mother and four rented a cottage residence of Sir John, enthusiastic neighbor lady to Colonel Brandon Jennings are introduced to the Marianas, hoping to contribute to a marriage.

- Colonel Brandon has a bitter tragic events of the past, he was forced to separate and Yi Laizha sweetheart, until he found her, she had become a prostitute tragic death.

- However,  Marianne loving Willoughby and unfrequented Colonel.

-And soon Colonel excuse to leave to go to London.

-And a woman named Lucy suddenly appeared and told Eleanor she had private life with Edward.

-They came in London, Marianne unexpectedly saw Willoughby . however Willoughby treat them as cold shoulder.

-Colonel Brandon told Eleanor,Willoughby wont love Marianne because she dont have money.

-Marianne sadly walk alone in the rain, but collapsed on the slopes. Colonel Brandon was saved her.

-Edward seized the opportunity to confided his love to Eleanor, but Eleanor sensibly controlling emotions and wanna Edward follow the promise to married with Lucy.

-Unexpectedly, the secret was exposed, Edward thereby being disinherited.

-He and Eleanor's love has taken a turn.

-Finally the both of sis getting their true love.

 About Movie

-This movie presenting Social satire and family ethical play.

-Movie present in neo-classical style.

-"Sense and Sensibility" is an American romantic movie, released in 1995 by the famous Chinese director Ang Lee

-screenplay adapted from the great British women writers Jane Austen 's novel .

-Sister Elena is representative of the rational.

-Sister Marianne is representative of the sensibility,  she believes that love is hot like fire.

-Film adopted a unique narrative technique, In the development of two parallel love line having a different kind of posision of love.

-Mariana's love life, she was play with emotion by  Willoughby's ... and Brandon loving Mariana. at the same time, Brandon also had a love tragedy. in the love of Edward and Eleanor. Fanny deter them. then ran out Lucy.

Creation of Film

-Thompson spent five years to writing and rewriting the script.

-He once writing 2 script for this movie and use the first one, because have good element.

-An Lee is a Chinese director but he need to direct the movie in England Classic  Old Style.

-He once spent 6 month to England to getting inspirited.

-Sense and sensibility used contributed clothing to emphasize the character's class 

And status.